yasusenpai SG very nice. Singing to the song Only Human by K from the album Beyond the Sea while reading it makes it more wonderful.
sqully SG thanks for the correction tho i did mention.. so how..i need to edit the org post liao?but would it spoil the pristine-ness of it?
LazerLordz SG I prefer poetry straight from the heart, unadulterated. Sorta like poetry of consciousness..
Dendrite88 SG Great poem and great feel very nice job. pretty emotional! Oh yeah, you could probably end off with "Would you still be my Valentine?" Just a suggestion.
jara SG very very genuine poem. explains the harsh reality of falling in love sometimes. it’s like straight from a heart
claus SG u hav to keep a look out for clues.... go read again. oh sqully... am i doing a gd job of making it not so obvious that we are clone accounts?
sqully SG read the content in its entirety..read it once,read it twice,read it thrice to get the geist of the emotional flow..if u still cant understand..well,perhaps it's not meant to be understood by u.
sqully SG another volunteer to join my army of the clones?brave new recruit how come i was oblivous to ur creation.oh or r u my one of my clones' clone?those mindless wannabes..
sqully SG and so u hav finally made an official self declaration that u r my clone!welcome to the club,mate!*gives LL a giant squeeze*